The Writer’s Memo
When writers send their writing to a publisher, they always
send a cover letter introducing it. Comment on the choices you made as a writer
(think of it like an instant replay on your writing process with color
commentary). When you hand in final versions, you will also be asked to
include your rough draft, your invention writing, any sentence-level revision
exercises, your skills checklist, and your peer review sheets. The
Writer's Memo should also address these stages in the writing process,
detailing what you have done to improve the writing. A good Writer's
Memo assesses what you see as the strengths and weaknesses of the piece, and a
thoughtful, well-written memo, because it accounts for things we might have
missed, can improve your grade. Use
this as a planning worksheet, but type your final memo and put it on top of
what you hand in.
Purpose
and Audience: Does your paper have a clear sense of
purpose? What did you want the paper
to do for a specific audience? What were
you trying to understand or have them understand? What’s the “resonating concern” in the piece?
Organization
/ Specifics: Is there analysis, or some sense that the
specific examples have further implications?
What did you do to develop your examples? Why did you organize the paper the way you
did?
Skills
/ Influences: What specific skills do you need to work on
(fragments, comma splices, spelling, word choice, wordiness, paragraphs,
organization, etc.)? Which readings
influenced you?
Process
and Revision: What did you go through (freewriting, last
minute?) What are you learning about writing and the writing process? What kinds of feedback did you get in peer
review. And, what did you focus on in
revision? Reflect on at least one
writing problem and they way you recognized and solved it.
Risk taking: Did you explore uncharted territory in the paper or take a risk in some way, to approach the topic from a new angle or perspective, or to write about something difficult? Did you attempt to fulfill the assignment in fresh way? Take risks in revision?