Title of Paper:

Writer:

Reviewer :

1. What are the major strengths of the paper? What do you like most about it?

2. Does the writer have a clear sense of purpose? What is his or her thesis?

3. Does the writer have a good sense of the audience for whom he or she is writing (that they’ve read the story, for example, and want an enhanced understanding of it)?

4. What suggestions can you make about focus and/or organization? Are the topics the paper brings up adequately handled; should the focus be more specific?

5. What would you like to know that the writer does not tell you? What things need to be developed further; where should there be more evidence or details?

6. List two suggestions you can make that you think could improve the next draft.

General Comments to weave in: Does the paper conform to the assignment? A close reading/literary analysis? Advice to reviewers: If you think something in the essay is not working well, say so, but be sure to support your criticisms with clear reasons, specific examples and, if possible, suggestions for improvement. Be honest. Be constructive. Give the feedback that you yourself would find most helpful.